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Dorian Copperfield (boy_silhouette) wrote,
@ 2008-07-06 22:23:00

Current mood:	artistic
Entry tags:	frank, judith, kain, l, mitch, poem, strix

Fights!
I am in my marble form. Because I wrote a poem for Frank. It is best with an okay jaw, yes? So I will share it.

Judith

The simple truth is in you
The very life you owned
Away, but not!
Gone, but never!
In living, you are eternal
In loving, you are immortal
One long, wooden jar!
But you are there
Outside the jar.
Outside the jar
You are everywhere.

I fought Mitch. We kicked butt!

I feel confident. Walks are essential. The woods don't scare me. Most of the birds are nice. Not all of them. Not...some. But some are. Some, ah, yes....some are. Very much nice.

Mitch, can we fight again? Or Kain, you too?

L? Brother? Will you fight me? I won't cry. I promise!

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	franksunderland 2008-07-07 02:33 am UTC (link)
	That's... beautiful, Dorian. I'm really touched. [Private to Dorian]I hate sounding like an old fool, but Judith is everywhere, to me... I'm sure she knows you wrote her this lovely poem, somehow. I... have tears in my eyes.[/Private] And I'm glad you're improving your fighting skills. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	boy_silhouette 2008-07-07 02:40 am UTC (link)
	{Private to Frank} I have tears, too, yes I do. There are some whose suns cannot be snuffed. I hope she....ehee...I hope she always remains everywhere to you. In many and in all! {End Private} Yes, me too! I can win more than before. One more than before, maybe. One is more than none. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	givemefood 2008-07-07 04:36 am UTC (link)
	You've been fighting? Great! It's good to know everyone's working so hard! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	boy_silhouette 2008-07-07 05:58 am UTC (link)
	Yes! I think so too. Twenty new dawns a day! You train too, yes? (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	givemefood 2008-07-07 06:41 am UTC (link)
	Oh yeah, I train tons. (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	boy_silhouette 2008-07-07 07:05 am UTC (link)
	It must make you extra hungry! I made chocolate pudding today. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	pyro_madness 2008-07-07 01:36 pm UTC (link)
	We can fight any time ya want. Heh, we definitely did kick butt. That's a real nice poem, too. You're on a roll with the poetry. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	boy_silhouette 2008-07-07 03:53 pm UTC (link)
	Yes, we did! And okay, I will remember this. I like fighting with you. Am I? Thank you! I am not so good with the words yet. But I have been reading much more because of Frank. I will get better. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	luke_lawliet 2008-07-07 06:42 pm UTC (link)
	It's a wonderful poem, Dorian. Of course I'll fight you. Provided you don't cry, of course... (Reply to this) (Thread)

	boy_silhouette 2008-07-07 07:24 pm UTC (link)
	Oh, thank you. I won't cry, don't worry. I'm doing better. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	born_of_a_wish 2008-07-07 06:42 pm UTC (link)
	Aren't you cute? (Reply to this) (Thread)

	boy_silhouette 2008-07-07 07:25 pm UTC (link)
	Am I? I never got called that before. Thank you! (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	born_of_a_wish 2008-07-07 07:28 pm UTC (link)
	Yeah, you're cute. (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	boy_silhouette 2008-07-07 07:44 pm UTC (link)
	Wow. Thank you again! How are you? (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	born_of_a_wish 2008-07-07 07:46 pm UTC (link)
	I'm fine. Bored out of my wits, but fine. (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	boy_silhouette 2008-07-07 07:51 pm UTC (link)
	Bored out of your wits? But you just got here! What will you do then? (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)